My Fable

Pretending to be what you are not can cause you trouble

One day Rabbit and her friend Flower were talking about their parents. Flower told Rabbit that her parents were scientists, Rabbit didn't want to tel her friend that her parents were only owned a flower shop so, she told her they were royal.Flower was shocked that her friends kept this from her yet happy that she had a friend that was royal.Flower asked Rabbit if she could come over sometime, but Rabbit lied and said that they were very ill. Once Rabbit left, Flower thought that she would give Rabbits parents some flowers, to cheer them up. But when she walked in she saw Rabbit hugging her mum and asking her dad for some afternoon tea, Flower was so mad with Rabbit so she yelled " Rabbit I'll never talk to you again". They were never friends since. Rabbit was very sad...

Poem-The Snake


Subject Matter- The snake by Sharon. The Snake is about a poisones, very hungry snake slithering through the grass ready to strike.

Purpose/Message/Theme- The message is that snakes can be very dangerous poisones or not you never go close to them or get them angry because you don’t know what you may or have not done but they will hurt you if they attack. You only think about going near one if its hurt but even then you MUST have professional handling so you know what to do.

Emotion/Mood/Feeling- In the first Stanza the poet is describing the snake its self, in the second stanza Sharon is telling us about the snake’s movements, in the last stanza the poet is telling us about the snake’s face emotion.
Techniques- In the poem the poet uses metaphors, personifications, similes and stanzas. But she does not use rhyming.

Summary- The poem flowed and was medium in length but was a very good poem. The poet Sharon really would have watched a snake because she used so really depth describing words throughout the poem, you really understood where she was coming from.

My Book


The Princess Diaries
Sixsational
In my book Mia (the main character) goes back to school after the summer holidays, the only thing is that her boyfriend Michael has gone away to college, leaving her to face a new school year alone. As is she has another problems with being the hair to the throne of Genovia and her boyfriend leaving she has to face a girl named Lana Weinberger who was dumped and feels she has to take it out on Mia, to make it worse her best friends elected her for class captain and the other candidate is Lana. To top it all off her Grandma is back in town and is still trying to teach Mia to be a princess.

My Similie about MY BROTHER

My brother is like a pimple because he is sometimes there when he is not wanted.
My brother is like a pimple because when you love him he goes away
My brother is like a pimple because when you attack him he attacks back
My brother is like a pimple because he likes to embarrass you on a special day
My brother is like a pimple because when you ignor him hedoesn't leave he comes back with friends.
My brother is like a pimple because when you want to throw him away you have to wait for along time.

What i have done in English this year (2009)


Term 1 - Short Story '' The Red Sea"

Term 2-The Silver Donkey
- Opinionative Speech " Zoo's Should Be Shut Down"

Term 3 - The Dark Hills Divide- Interview
- Poetry

Term 4 - Introduction to Shakespeare




My Reflection on the Dark Hills Divide

On Alexa's annual summer trips to Bridewell with her father, the mayor of Lathbury, she seems to spend much of her time dreaming of escaping the wall. Having lived within the walls all of her life (12 years), all she wants is to explore the world beyond the wall. But, the walls are heavily guarded; many people suggest that forests and hills are no place for a child, especially a young girl. Yet she gets past the wall and ending up being the only one that can save Bridewell from Sebastian, and they many convicts.

This book takes awhile to get in to because of the first chapter, but once you get past the 15th chapter you really start to enjoy the millions of creative characters . My favourite character has to Yipes a small little man that is best friends with Alexa and took her on her journey to adventure, to Darius. Over all this is an interesting book!

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