Pretending to be what you are not can cause you trouble
One day Rabbit and her friend Flower were talking about their parents. Flower told Rabbit that her parents were scientists, Rabbit didn't want to tel her friend that her parents were only owned a flower shop so, she told her they were royal.Flower was shocked that her friends kept this from her yet happy that she had a friend that was royal.Flower asked Rabbit if she could come over sometime, but Rabbit lied and said that they were very ill. Once Rabbit left, Flower thought that she would give Rabbits parents some flowers, to cheer them up. But when she walked in she saw Rabbit hugging her mum and asking her dad for some afternoon tea, Flower was so mad with Rabbit so she yelled " Rabbit I'll never talk to you again". They were never friends since. Rabbit was very sad...
3 comments:
Hello Tomikah
I really like this moral of you story because if you pretend to be somebody your not you can get in trouble.
Samantha
I really liked how you used animals to get the moral across. This made it interesting and fun to read. It would be good if you checked your spelling and punctuation though it has some mistakes in it.
But overall, GOOD JOB
Nathalie
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